Poetry Project

I started to try and put some rhyming to this poem and I decided on an ABAB rhyming structure. Then, I have to confess it didn't take me that long, I realized the poem needed a major face-lift, but I had warned about this in the previous post. So, for today, I have just trimmed it up some and posted it on here without bothering to rhyme it, as I might still edit it again tomorrow. However, I don't intend to do more than a couple of more posts on the poem, so I will keep the editing to a minimum and move on to the cool, rhyme part.
Here it is, have fun and I hope you can read my scribbling
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