Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Poetry Project:::Last Entry

Okay, I know we've all been waiting for this project to be over so I can move on to talking about more meaningful things like...well, drinking hot chocolate at noon, or something like that. For the final edit, I changed just a few things; I removed the previous first line and began with the second line and added a new third line - not really a new line as it was in some of the previous edits.
So, here it is, I hope you enjoyed the process of trying to establish some type of rhyming sequence in my poem, and keep coming back to see what is going on. The doodling helps me focus, so you will see it on a lot of the materials I scan.






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